Watch Me Jump
Jan. 3rd, 2021 09:54 pmName: Watch Me Jump
Status: Complete
Site: https://jeremygable.itch.io/watchmejump
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: F/F ... kinda, but not a romance
Description: A story about a basketball celeb fucking up

This is a game that was adapted from a screenplay, which I believe is the first time I've ever written those words. As such, its strengths are in the writing and its weaknesses are in the game design.
Status: Complete
Site: https://jeremygable.itch.io/watchmejump
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: F/F ... kinda, but not a romance
Description: A story about a basketball celeb fucking up

This is a game that was adapted from a screenplay, which I believe is the first time I've ever written those words. As such, its strengths are in the writing and its weaknesses are in the game design.
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I wonder if this is best categorized as a kinetic novel, despite the presence of choices and a little mspaint avatar that you move around on occasion. I think if you enjoy kinetic novels and don't really need IF to adapt to your choices this is a good, snippy story that doesn't waste your time. But I think that as a story it should have remained a play. It probably is a good one.